
I thought this would be a good time to give you a little taste of the story. It's from the very beginning, when Harry meets his angel. Well, meets isn't completely accurate. He already knew her. He just didn't realize before that she was his angel. I'll let the story explain it. Here's the opening scene of "Harry and the Redheaded Angel."

“Turn Your Eyes Upon Jesus” was the hymn. I really had heard it a thousand times. The pianist was really vamping it up, though, so I didn’t recognize it at first. I figured it out as she was finishing.
“You barely made it,” whispered Lucas, scooting over to make room for me. “What happened?”
“Guess,” I said, flipping through the bulletin without really looking at it.
“Again?”
“Again.” I glanced down the order of service, half paying attention. Something on the page caught my eye. “I wonder…”
“Wonder what?”
“Huh? Oh, nothing.”
“What?”
“It’s just the soloist. Same name as somebody I went to high school with.”
“In West Virginia?”
“No, the other place I went to high school.”
He looked at me, his face deadpan. “Such disrespect. I just mean I doubt it’s her.”
“Yeah,” I said. “Deanna Baxter’s probably a pretty common name.”
“You know her well?”
“No, she was a couple years behind me.”
“But you remember her name?”
“Dated my best friend for a while.”
“Looker?”
“I don’t know. She was only sixteen last I saw her. Redhead.”
“You do like redheads.”
“I do.”
“Speaking of which, what are you going to do about J Lo?”
“I don’t know. She’s getting really temperamental.”
“I’d say. It’s not even that cold.”
“Tell J Lo that.”
It had become unseasonably cool early for Louisville, Kentucky, with the night before, November 1st, falling well below freezing.
“You gotta do something about her,” he said.
“Pay me a living wage and I’ll gladly move on.”
He started to respond, no doubt with something to the effect that I was barely worth what he was paying me as it was. To which I would have said something to the effect of bite me, after which we both would have laughed too loudly for the setting. That was our relationship from the day we met. Never a serious word except when it came to work. And sometimes not even then. With some of the cases we worked, you couldn’t help but laugh. Others, it was laugh to keep from crying.
But before he could speak, the heavens opened and my whole life changed. I’d only been half listening to the pastor as he introduced the soloist. Lucas and I were busy gabbing. After a short piano introduction, she began singing. From that first note, I was captured, captivated, entranced. I was half afraid to look up, nearly convinced she was an angel and that her glory would blind me. As it turned out, I wasn’t far from right.
Well, Shalan, I thought, better hope she’s beautiful because you’re going to marry her. Slowly, deliberately, I raised my eyes. Maybe it was coincidence or possibly divine intervention, but she looked right at me at precisely the same moment I focused on her. Probably mirroring mine, her eyes grew wide with recognition. It was Dee Baxter. My Dee Baxter. Well, to be fair, she was Otis’ Dee Baxter back in high school. She’s mine now, I thought.
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